| 7 Mar 2004 | Anonymous | Loading...The art is pretty good. The only thing that i can say is that the stomach area looks a little off. It appears to my eyes that its could be the folds of his shirt, or hes put on a few pounds. Hard to say. Hope this helps Laurita R. Williamson replies: "I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment. I see what you are referring to, and also that the whole shape of the shirt along his chest is off. Thanks." | |
| 21 May 2004 | Queen of the world | Loading...just one wee pointer and its one thing I always get wrong. The Left hand is way too small. try to remember that an open hand should always be roughly the size of the persons face. Remember that and you'll be flying- not literally... | |
| 21 May 2004 | Anonymous | Loading...Use photo references! There's no shame in getting friends and family to pose as models, or tearing out pages from beauty or muscle magazines. Nine out of ten professional fantasy artists always use photo references. You're a great artist now, but you'll be amazed at the improvement! | |
| 21 May 2004 | Lufa | Loading...The face is good and its expression too. I agree about the shirt along the chest; it doesn't quite look as though it follows the line of his chest but on the arms, the fabric is great  Also, the left lower arm looks as though it's a little flat and almost curves upwards (it could just be me though). Oh, and, is he sitting or standing? At the moment his lower body pose isn't as good as the top. Oh, btw, LOVE the fire and stone; you are so good at backgrounds! | |